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Some lyrics for ya
« Thread Started on Oct 21, 2007, 8:19pm »

This is one of my band's songs, called 33. Based on the Battlestar Galactica episode of the same name

33

4 days on the run
Reset the clocks, 33 minutes
Prepare for the next attack
We can all sleep when we're dead

Maybe this time they wont come
Maybe this time they will leave us alone
We'll just wait and see!
Out of nowhere they'll appear
To bring us our final rest
When the clocks hit 33!

4 days on the run
Reset the clocks, 33 minutes
Prepare for the next attack
We can all sleep when we're dead

Maybe this time they wont come
Maybe this time they will leave us alone
We'll just wait and see!
Out of nowhere they'll appear
To bring us our final rest
When the clocks hit 33!

Is there a traitor among us?
Preparing to strike from within
We must silence him
If we are to be free

We can't keep running till the end of time
We can't keep running till the end of time
We can't keep running till the end of time
We can't keep running till the END! OF! TIIIIIIIIIME!

What do you guys think?

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Re: Some lyrics for ya
« Reply #1 on Oct 22, 2007, 8:43am »

And here's another

Fall into the flames

Something evil's coming after you
And there's nothing you can do
Prepare to strike, there is no place to run
When you're caught in the grips of The Destroyer who has come

Feel the burn!
As you fall into the flames
Feel the burn!
As he play his fire games
Nowhere to run!
He can smell your fear
Feel the burn!
The Destroyer is here

As the Earth crumbles and the stars begin to fall
A hero will arise and she will save us all
When the darkness closes in
She will light the way, lead us to a brighter day

Feel the burn!
As you fall into the flames
Feel the burn!
As he play his fire games
Nowhere to run!
He can smell your fear
Feel the burn!
The Destroyer is here

Feel the burn!
As you fall into the flames
Feel the burn!
As he play his fire games
Nowhere to run!
He can smell your fear
Feel the burn!
The Destroyer is here!

Any guesses on what inspired this song?

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Re: Some lyrics for ya
« Reply #2 on Oct 22, 2007, 2:26pm »

One suggestion, change "And there's nothing you can do" to "And there's nothing thatyou can do"

Otherwise, Fall into the Flames basically just made a melody in my head. That's awesome. Though if you simply called it 'Orannis', it might be more appealing. Who knows.

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As for the first one, doooooooesn't really make any sense.

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Re: Some lyrics for ya
« Reply #3 on Oct 22, 2007, 2:30pm »

I guess you need to have seen the BG episode to understand it

And I would change that line but it wouldn't fit the riff

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Re: Some lyrics for ya
« Reply #4 on Oct 22, 2007, 6:36pm »

Fall into the Flames is really good, I love the second chorus, "As the Earth crumbles and the stars begin to fall" that's a fantastic piece of imagery there.

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Re: Some lyrics for ya
« Reply #5 on Oct 22, 2007, 6:53pm »

Thanks, its one of the first songs I wrote

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Re: Some lyrics for ya
« Reply #6 on Dec 5, 2007, 5:37pm »

Here's a song I wrote about an old friend that I'm really missing right now

Close to You

I feel empty, I feel hollow
Without you in my life
I never got the chance to say goodbye
The day i found out that you were gone
I died inside
I never got the chance to say goodbye

The Sun's gone from my sky
There's nothing but the rain
Will I ever see you again?
The cold is creeping in
And it's ripping me in two
I'll do anything to be close to you

I think about you every single day
Are you feeling the same way?
I sit and wonder
Are you feeling the same way?
I miss you more than you'll ever know
Why did you have to go?

I miss you more than words can say!
Think about you every damn day!
Please let the pain will go away!
Maybe we'll be together again someday!
Together again someday...

Just thought I'd share this one with you. If you like then say so and what parts, if you don't then to be honest I'd rather you didn't say. Just like the person it's about, this song means a lot to me and I'd prefer it if people didn't critisize it

« Last Edit: Dec 7, 2007, 3:26pm by grimlockking »

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Re: Some lyrics for ya
« Reply #7 on Dec 7, 2007, 3:02pm »

Touching.

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